This is my draft for my double page spread. I like the left hand side of the page, I put an image on which takes up the full side of the page and I think this works really well. I also like the title which is layered over the top of the image. I think the other side of the double page spread needs some work on it. The black lines in between the writing doesn't really work and I think that I need to stick too only two colours for the writing so that it doesn't look to much. I also need to fill up the blank space more by adding an image and moving the quote to a different part of the page.
Feedback
"I like the layout of the page, I just think the side with the writing is a bit plain and needs more work"
"I think that the image looks good, maybe move the quote onto the side with the image or make it smaller"
"I like it, I just think you need to fill in the space above the writing."
Improvements
- I am going to make the side of the page with the writing on it more interesting by adding more images and changing the black lines between the text for something else.
- I am going to make the introduction to the text stand out more.
- I am also going to add more text as at the minute I only have a few questions and I think it needs re writing.
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