This is the draft for my contents page. I think this is ok but the writing doesn't look very good or stand out enough, nothing really grabs your attention. I also think that adding Beat, the name of the magazine, at the top will look good as it will show brand identity.
Feedback
"I like the way you are going with this idea, but I think it still needs a lot of work on the writing."
"I like the image and the way that the writing follows the bricks in the background"
"I think that you need a background behind the writing to make it stand out more"
Improvements
- I am going to add a background behind the writing to make it all stand out more because on this draft you don't really pay much attention to it.
- I am going to add beat at the top to show brand identity.
- I am going to change the colours and outlines of some of the writing to make it stand out more.
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