This is another draft, I don't like this one as much as my other as I think it is a bit plain and empty, i don't think that they are enough articles on it. I don't think the writing stands out enough and a lot of it isn't easy to read.
I asked a friend for feedback on this draft and they said: "I like the layout on this one as well but I don't think it has enough on it. Also the main picture doesn't have an article to go with it so it doesn't fit in. Think more about including more of an obvious colour scheme."
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